Scribe of Love

 

you are the scribe
upon my soul
you etch your desires
with the ink of passion

I capitulate to fulfill
each yearning, every need
till I complete you
with the fullness
of my soulful deeds

you complete me
with loving etchings
upon my soul
hieroglyphics of devotion
unwavering adoration

you are the scribe
upon my soul
your ink of passion
writes our destiny

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Posted in Love, Romance | 17 Comments

17 Responses to Scribe of Love

  1. Gabriella says:

    You have written a very sensual poem. I particularly like the first two lines.

  2. brian miller says:

    nice…lov ehte etchings on the soul…the heiroglyphs of devotion….there is a cool intimacy to this….and intensity….

  3. Mary says:

    Seconding what Gabriella has said…this really has a nice sensuality to it. And I like the music you have playing as well!!

  4. yelena says:

    a wonderful sensual poem..like hieroglyphics of devotion especially..

  5. Pamela says:

    Sensuous write. I believe my soul has been etched upon as well.

    Pamela

  6. 1emeraldcity says:

    You truly are a master…or should I say mistress of sensuous, poetic expression. Beautiful work!…and love the guitar accompaning…perfect!

  7. Talicha J. says:

    that last stanza…yes! I really enjoyed this, I like your work Dorianna 🙂

  8. MarinaSofia says:

    Like the last stanza especially. Is that you playing the guitar? It’s gorgeous!

    • Dorianna says:

      Thank you Marina..the guitar player is a good friend and very talented musician. There is a link in the side bar with information about Evan and link to his site where you can hear his eclectic musical talents. On my other blog http://paintswithwords.com you can hear his musical composition to my lyrics. He is so talented he is always in demand for collaboration but I hope to do a song with him again in the future.

  9. Margaret says:

    hieroglyphics of devotion … sigh Lovely!

  10. danniehill says:

    Etchings last much longer than the embrace- beautifully done, dear one.

  11. Jeep Walters says:

    Is it hot in here, or is it your words? The answer is an unequivocal: Yes! Sensuous can come of raunchy, but the trick as you display is to teasingly insinuate the passion. The readers mind will go where you lead. This is excellent work!

  12. Rowan Taw says:

    Passionate words, delicately chosen.

  13. danadampier says:

    This is awesome! It seeps intimacy out of every word!

  14. seduction is saying just enough, but not quite
    allowing space for the yearning to begin
    it is an art, you are an artist.

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