One Soul Created by Two

sing me your blues
I’ll change the hues
to a melodious rainbow of joy

reveal your painful scars
I’ll venture as far
as it takes to heal your wounds

two hearts open wide
our revitalizing guide
love will claim our souls

embracing every joyful sigh
consoling when you cry
rectifying tears with kisses

you’re my sun shining bright
magical starlit night
you give my aura radiance

like the eternal shore
to the ocean’s roar
a union time can’t undo

love’s roots go deep
my promise I’ll keep
never will I stray from you

decreed divine
you and I combined
one soul created by two

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Posted in Love, Passion, Poetry, Romance | Tagged as: , , , , | 16 Comments

16 Responses to One Soul Created by Two

  1. Dorianna.. such a warm feeling of love you leave me with.. love the three-line senryu pieces each stanza a little poem by itself. really well written

  2. aprille says:

    What an interesting rhyme scheme: now you see it, now you don’t.
    That is exactly what rhyme should be like@ not quite predictable and such a treat when it appears.

  3. brian miller says:

    smiles…beautiful little love poem you got there…i too like how each little stanza could be a stand alone poem…i like the intimate commitment in this…

    • Dorianna says:

      thank you Brian..from reading your work, I am becoming aware that you are a committed person..happy that the intimate commitment reached you favorably.

  4. Morgan says:

    a beautiful poem very creatively written. so wonderful 🙂

  5. naramalone says:

    So romantic and sweetly sexy. Loved this.

  6. Gabriella says:

    I second Björn on the use of the form. You have written a beautiful love poem!

  7. vandana says:

    such a beautiful song to be sung by two hearts connected forever……………

  8. JunkChuck says:

    What’s next–I can’t be the only one out here waiting…..

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